Let me just say: This comic has AMAZING Sprite work, most of the time, and that's probably the best part of the comic, but I do have quite a lot of problems with this too, with the fact that they break the fourth wall WAY Too much, although it can be funny a few times, this is just annoying, and the grammar is also awful, and amazing sprite comics like The After Subtract, and it's sequel, Adding Zero are known for the great sprite work, and the amazing characters in it, but with this comic? The only thing that makes it decent is the quality, and the fact that you use so many old memes is just annoying, and all of the characters are just shallow and annoying, and none of them have any real personality, being that at the start of the comic, luigi was really stupid, and mentioned donuts, but then you're trying to make him have more personality, and not be suck a funny character, and you keep skipping a bunch of things that are about to happen, and replace it with something else that doesn't even contribute to anything in the plot, and the fact that some of the characters in it just sound straight up racist, and they aren't really trying to get much, just a mushroom that cures any wound, and brings people back to life? 1-Up, anyone? And this dragon guy doesn't seem to care much about anything, and the drawings you keep doing are awful! And really, it's just a bad comic with amazing (For the most part) Sprite work, and that's the only good factor of this comic! 2.5/5.
@I have no exact names: holy jelly filled scrotums how long did it take you to write that?
Lol it's so long I lost interest 1/3 of the way reading it
Leave the grammar nazi'ing to me punk
Critiquing this nig is MY life's work
Critiques, heh? I know somewhere where you can get a review on your comic... It's quite popular, too, you should try it, kcspice. The author of the reviews is Ultimate Yoshi (you can't miss him, he made the "Kirby Adventure" sprite comic as well as the "Yoshi & Kirby" sprite comic.).
The best part is that you can request a review of your comic.
@Extremmefan: He makes great comics, and the reviews he makes are amazing, although his review would probably be hateful like mine, but probably more forgiving than me, also sorry for not having an extremely long comment.
@Grammar Nazis: You're just showing everyone how stupid you are, great job. Also, I don't even want to do anything on this, due to basically everyone on this being stupid, generic 4chan users, but I want to do this until the comic's over, because then I'll be able to complain on how incomplete the awful ending will be, and really, Ultimate Yoshi will have to do the justice this comic deserves, I'm only an amateur at reviewing, but it's better than most of the people on the internet, and people like you just plug their ears, and don't listen to good reviews, they just like to sit around, say insulting and racist comments. I'm done replying to your comments, it's just a waste of time.
Comic reviews dude how do you review an ongoing comic!? U could just be like "Oh their is no character to this kid" but thats irrelevant seeing as the comic is ongoing and the author hasnt written em out yet.... Reviews for comics are dumb... Just be like "Hey this page is okay heres some advice to make it better"...